Write a condolence message to a friend email

Suppose, you are Robi. You have a friend named Mim. Recently she has lost her father. Now, write a condolence message to her.

To: mim69@gmail.com
Subject: Condolence message.

Dear Mim,

I am so sorry for your loss. Your father was a wonderful person who will be so sorely missed. Please accept my condolences to both you and your family, and if there is anything I can don't hesitate to ask. Please don't give up your hopes. Remember that you are the elder daughter of your family. If you want to give up then just think about your mom once.

Stay strong and take care to your mom and youngers.

Yours ever,
Robi